Tuesday, February 16, 2010

My poem

Walking down a mile
He comes across a smile
Boy likes a girl
She's like a pearl

Friends they become
The blossoms have come
Very much they enjoy the time
Till now its all fun and fine

In a dream he comes to know
The feelings he had from a while ago
Love was occupying his mind
For the one and the only kind

Mind reading is not what he can do
And that his friend didn't knew
His feelings are so pure
Does she have any cure?

- Abhi

13 comments:

  1. Hay.. very nice poem.. its touching.. I knw u got this skill too, now u r opening up.. keep on writing..

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  2. really nice work. nice poem. Programming, Poem-ming. you are multi-talented.

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  3. Good work....it's different and unending. A lot of future scope. Keep it up. Ganesh

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  4. chann..pan tu kavita kadhi pasun lihyala lagla!
    Mahesh

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  5. ITS NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111

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  6. Kay re aaj kal kavita pan karayala laglas ka ?
    Pan jhakas ahe poem....nice work !!!

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  7. abhya aaj kal program lihayche sodun kavita

    lihala lagala ........kay kon milale kay?????

    khup chan

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  8. Superb! fantastic!! excellent!!! mind blowing!!!!

    :D :P

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